It is indeed that online shopping has become a popular practice among the majority of the public. This essay discusses the causes of this trend and further focuses on its influence on the shops and communities.
Two major reasons turn out to be crowd pullers in this case. One of the major features of online shopping is its ease of accessibility which is drawing people into buying through the web. Customers can buy a product with a mere swipe or click of fingers. For instance, to place an order all it needs to be done is just select the product and confirming an order. Moreover, the variety of products present on the websites has been intriguing the buyers. Literally, thousands of versions and designs of a commodity can be seen and even compared within no time. All these reasons constitute the success of online shopping.
However, though this trend is greatly advantageous from a consumer's point of view, it is causing some serious damage to businesses and manufacturing groups. As the frequency of buying online increased the number of customers visiting shops has declined these days. Consequently, losses are inevitable and small-scale businesses cannot afford to withstand this situation. For illustration, since the sale of clothing on the internet started the little textile shops and handloom shops are on the verge of extinction.
In the overview, Online shopping is definitely a significant advancement in the perspective of time consumption. However, it is posing a threat to shops and communities making them harder to run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03149606299 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79049163656 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 254.0 20.2975951904 1251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1278.0 106.682146367 1198% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 254.0 20.7667163134 1223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 53.0 7.06120827912 751% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3501486668 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.3501486668 0.084324248473 415% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231998399127 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565118435709 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 129.3 13.0946893788 987% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -186.33 50.2224549098 -371% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 102.3 11.3001002004 905% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.46 8.58950901804 238% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 103.6 10.1190380762 1024% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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