In this era, to find a better education and sophisticated lifestyle, people are moving far from their homes and friends. Although living far from family touch can make people homesick and sometimes they might feel lonely, I believe that it makes people independent and mature, which easily outweighs the adversities.
In the search for better education and lifestyle, people have to leave their families behind. For example, in developing countries like Nepal and India people have to suffer from getting good academic and better jobs, due to which they have to choose abroad for pursuing their further education. Similarly, nowadays almost every citizen wants to become independent they have their own dreams and demands like having a luxury lifestyle on having trending private vehicles, but all these demands can not be fulfilled by their parents for they have to move far from their hometown in developed countries like the USA, Canada.
On the other hand, people who live far from their families have to suffer loneliness. In newly environment, it is very difficult to adjust in the beginning. They have to suffer from financial problems and they got no one there to help them, as a result, they might get stressed and sometimes people get depressed because lack of emotional support. For example, there are many cases in those people living abroad sometimes commit suicide because of loneliness.
In conclusion, since, this benefits people to achieve their desired goals after staying far from their homeland, the drawbacks like getting depressed in my opinion the advantage easily outnumbered
- Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic results while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that criminal behaviour has genetic causes Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that in order to be effective political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently c 50
- Many governments think that economic progress is most important goal some people however think that other types of progress and equally important for a country 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24513618677 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54395565937 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56420233463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0649039694 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219380762511 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105519146551 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602516652818 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153617765926 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398268047736 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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