More and More people work at home and study at home with the help of development of computer technology. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.
it is irrefutable that, due to the advancement of technology, working and studying at home have become so easy with help of computer .it has positive sides as well as some down sides
To begin with the plethora of benefits that people do work and study at home with through computer technology. The first major benefit is that people can save their time to move from office place to home .they can give the rest their body ,because in office and school,college employees and students face pressure and burden related to work and study. Second benefit is that they can take a lots of information about work and study with the help of internet because today internet has brought the many changes in work life and study life .Moreover, people can easily spend their time with family members, even they can go outside with their friends, while at office and school, college this is impossible for them.
moving further, to other benefits are that people can save the environment, which is beneficial for them ,because they can protect their body from many diseases, which creates on that time ,when they go to workplace and college.people can spend their time on other hobbies, which make them physically fit.
However, no doubt computer technology has brought the charm in working and studying at residence, but it has some drawbacks. At home people can not complete their work and study without help of other employees and teachers because in workplace and study place employees and teachers are necessary to solve their problems, which sometimes they face at home due to relatives and kid .
To sum up, it is true that computers are very important in field of workplace and study place, but working and studying can not properly possible at home ,so this situation can't be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, no doubt, as well as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86842105263 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47465193044 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486842105263 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9685422855 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 211.428571429 106.682146367 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.4285714286 20.7667163134 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.8571428571 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313641464663 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18424523886 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1264317452 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206979256046 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966289810372 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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