some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a persons's culture and characters from their choice of clothes. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
it is irrefutable that due to the advancement of era, to showing person's culture and tradition has become very easy in the whole world. so in this essay, I firmly agree with this given statement.so in the following paragraphs , I shall discuss a number of arguments.
To commence with, why it is possible to tell lots about a person's culture background and customs of the persons, there are several reasons,which are contributing in this phenomenon. The first major reason is that due to the availability of print media as well as satellite in every corner in the world, to telling people's culture and tradition have become easy because today mostly people spend time on watching tv and reading newspaper, so because of this people can easily come to know about the other nation's culture and fashion of other country's citizens. second possible reason is that because of communication devices people can show their culture to other persons. Throught the cell phone and other electronic gadgets, which have become very famous nowadays.
Moving further, to another causes are that due to transport system such cheaper flights and public transport, so with the help of these transport system people can go anywhere in the entire world and they can easily come to know about the other's person culture , when they go to other nations. Apart from these other cause is that due to historical attraction people can also the another country culture. For instance, India is a diverse country, there lots people belong to different cultural background, so when the visitors visit over there than they learn various types of things related to culture and tradition, customs.
However, no doubt today people can come know about different culture and person's character but some extent to telling another person's culture can not be possible because of people are remain busy in their work and they have become workaholic so it is very impossible to them to telling another's person culture and learn the different different due to less time in people's life.
To sum up, I pen down concluding, it is true that in modern era everything come to know about has become easy anywhere, due to the availability technology devices, but sometimes it can be impossible, which can not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, apart from, for instance, no doubt, as well as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98944591029 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5965501334 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493403693931 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8161947144 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.909090909 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4545454545 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261294289597 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107549123004 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777882685697 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147861576497 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812072827366 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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