More and more prisons are being built to house the world's criminals and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that medical and phycological assistance is what is required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Increasing number of prisons are being erected to accommodate the criminals and a lot of people consider that extended-period imprisonment is the clue to find solutions the crime issue. Others hold the view that medical and spiritual support should be main priority to diminish its potential.
First of all, holding criminals in a one place for a long time and provide them with nutrition and life need necessities are not a perfect solution in term of economy of state. In addition, construction of new prisons is also somehow big finance challenge which is driven from budget of country as well as it is pointless to keep criminal if he keep implementing his manner. For example, ordinary people pay taxes for all thing from drinking water to just staying uninjured in one day but criminals are exempt from all duties for specific period. Probably, for this reason government should back up endeavours which orientated to diminish crime rate from beginning stage.
Medical and psychological aid are a needful component to eradicate raising obstacle. Mainly, people who tended to commit crime, are formed as profligate not in a one day or a year but during the several years because of psychological and health issues. Human is not an animal which you can obey him by using force or some captive condition. Instead of focusing on only punishing one after crime done, reasons and triggers should investigated to avoid further outcomes.
To sum up, medical and spiritual aid must be first campaign to solve increasing crime rate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'keeps'.
Suggestion: keeps
... it is pointless to keep criminal if he keep implementing his manner. For example, o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03937007874 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78705956797 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.70352392 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149427933759 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553757839119 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426919384647 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100780296441 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465973752341 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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