More and more prisons are being built to house the world's criminals and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that medical and psychological assistance is what is required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Day by day the number of prisons that are being built is increasing. The opinions of people about this situation were divided: some people think that this is good, while others think that they need to pay attention to the psychological state of the criminals and provide them with medical care.
On the one hand, life imprisonment of criminals would ensure the safety and security of other citizens and society as a whole. Moreover, no one can guarantee that they will not commit crimes again. In addition, do not forget that many criminals already have a worldview and no talk will help them transform.
On the other hand, everyone has the right to a second chance. Having sentenced a person to life imprisonment, the state would have shown injustice towards people. It is also worth noting that many people commit crimes because of mental problems, so it would be better if the state would provide medical assistance to such people.
From my point of view, it’s better to give two criminals a second chance and provide them with medical care, as well as with everything they need and help them find a new path in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43975196061 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7880314947 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162791128373 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646421670957 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409885707633 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930096641015 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402498798783 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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