Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that it has had a very negative impact.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Over time, all areas of life were modernized, including transport. With the creation of airplanes, people have gained a lot of amenities, although some still oppose this and that air traveling has negative impact.
On the one hand, airplanes brought and introduced convenience to people's lives. For example, it is the fastest mode of transport and therefore suitable for carriage of goods over a long distance. it require less time. Also, air transport is free from physical barriers because it follows the shortest and direct routes where seas, mountains and forests do not obstruct. one of the most important aspects of air transport is that it plays a significant role in the national defense of the country, because modern wars are fought with airplanes. Airways prevail over the destruction of the enemy in a short time.
On the other hand, air transport is considered costlier as compare to other mode of transport. The operating cost of aero-planes are higher and it involves a great deal of expenditure on the construction of aerodromes and aircraft. because of this reason the fare of air transport are high that common people can’t afford it. Additionally, this type of transportation can be a danger to human health as people can be radiated by radiation at a height. In addition, most accidents occur during air traveling.
In conclusion, it seems to me that advantages of air traveling overweight disadvantages. Since air traveling is the fastest and most comfortable forms of traveling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18292682927 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96869615338 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.008665728 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125323417646 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429381362403 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05010814943 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934893265083 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046353019847 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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