Thanks to the increase of technology, people today have greater amounts of free time.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the conveniences created by modern technology?
Due to advances in technology the lifestyle of an ordinary man has become less arduous, leading to have more free time than ever. Industry now has less strenuous work to do; much of the work that is to do with even mere studying is available on the device with internet connection; and mere phone has even more abilities that a computer may have. However, as far as the argument goes, this trend has its own privileges to enjoy, as well as negative impact on the behaviour of a person.
Advantages, namely computerized process, created robots that do ten hours of work in a mere hour, along with absence of tiredness and such. Benefit that a person can have now is to spend some more valuable time with his family, which was previously troublesome to do. For example, working in a factory a person does controlling and overseeing the process with commands only, having come home he has more energy to put into his family, which however was hardly a case previously. Another obvious benefit can be related to studying process. Today, going to libraries and looking for certain topic has become much more easier than ever, since it only takes a couple of lines on a searching software, or Google. In the past, for instance, it could take hours if not a day.
On the other hand, such trend seemingly is backfiring in terms of activity level of a person in everyday situation. Studies prove that sedentary lifestyle is contributing to illnesses such as cardiovascular diseases, migraines, anxiety and depression. In fact, there is a sitting disease which is responsible for health risks. Another interesting facts is that, now a regular person spends 2 more hours in front of a TV than they did in the past.
To conclude, the comforts of increase in technology are tremendous, benefiting from a little more time with a family, of course if drawbacks are not considered. I believe that technology has more benefits rather not, as long as lifestyles of people are encouraged to be more active.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...oking for certain topic has become much more easier than ever, since it only takes a couple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, of course, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79651162791 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7273685877 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5700447486 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936573650437 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313144954895 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411333770938 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606538737047 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405095422295 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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