Workforce distribution across nations is of great challenge to many governments. Some people claim that the brain-drain happening in poor countries to rich ones is another form of unfair theft. Others, however, argue this is merely part of the unavoidable proccess of employees around the world, particularly ones in professional fields such as computing, engineering and medicine. To my mind, I am in favor of the latter.
It is a natural disposition for specialists in underdeveloped to find employment in prosperous nations. One of the reasons is the guarantee of better career prospects. Exposed to top-notch facilities and professional environment with abundant financial supports in research, they can see themselves creating impressive breakthroughs, allowing scientific aspects to transform greatly around the globe. What is more, the movement is much likely to offer those people higher income to help their underpriviledged families in their home countries. As most poor nations inevitably impose poverty and corruption to their people such as India and Vietnam, a considerable sum of salary is a helpful and practical support.
However, compensation needs to be made to poor countries given that they lose a great deal of professionalists with their valuable resources and effort for a long period of time. As far as I can say, this act is somehow cumbersome and complicated as it is of paramount provocation to calculate the exact amount of remuneration money. Yet, by proper administration, governments can deal with this problem effectivily like investing a suitable proportion of revenues into underdeveloped nations. In addition, it is efficious measures that can be a catalyst for encouraging people to remain in their countries to help develope them. As we live in technological and industrial age, with the help of forces of globalisation, more can be handled quickly by aiding and cooperating amongst countries.
As the movement can not be stopped, I believe it is more necessary to focus our concentration on mutual development, redressing the imbalance amongst nations around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...mployees around the world, particularly ones in professional fields such as computin...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...aluable resources and effort for a long period of time. As far as I can say, this act is someh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in addition, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46341463415 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35134620948 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6182762028 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.466666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196990971495 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576692797623 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665158018897 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111431253209 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025777463384 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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