The older generations are often regarded as people with a customary system of beliefs taking roots since time immemorial. Some claim that these ideas, despite being way traditional, still hold value regarding our lifestyle, school of thought and decorum. Others, however, argue they are becoming irrelevant for the young in this ever-changing world. To my mind, I partly agree with the former viewpoint.
On the one hand, it is understandable that some traditional ideas of the old are outdated to younger generations. One thing is contractual marriage. Many teenagers wish to individually opt for their partner based on their compatible characteristic patterns. That means the concept of defining a spouse dependent solely on their status and financial condition is fairly narrow-minded to most people nowadays. What is more, the idea related to gender inequality of older time which was justified has become intolerable to younger generations. Some social movements like “Metoo movement” is an exemplary of the youth trying to eradicate the gender gap that prevents women from climbing up the corporate ladder and taking control of their own lives.
On the other hand, I believe we ought to hold onto some ideas still valuable to the young in this brisk-pace world although they stem from ancient time and lifestyle. To begin with, the notion of hard work and determination would lead to success and fulfillment is of great importance regardless of timeline and types of job. Everything outstanding seems to boil down to perseverence, for example becoming a doctor or building up a marvelous theater. Second, patriotism which has been long considered a vital component for properous nation still holds value to the young. Many professionals, although working in other nations, have an inclination to return to their homecountry for comparable contribution with the love of nation in their hearts. Last but not least, the young can learn to take pride in their jobs as their ancestors did regardless of how low the wage was at that time, which leads to high self-esteem and dedication.
In conclusion, although traditional views are too old to be applied to modern contexts, I strongly believe some of them still help younger generations to be well-prepared and confident for stepping into this challenging environment.
- Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering computing and medicine Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from po 84
- The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live think and behave However some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life To what extent do you agree or disagree w 50
- Nowadays some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees Why is in this case Is a positive or negative development 89
- Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29110512129 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0036630959 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614555256065 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1229655451 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.470588235 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188722948502 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534083383191 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522974092985 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118395201681 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397324691284 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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