More and more students are choosing to study at college and university in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
More and more students have been traveled abroad to study at college and university these days even though they make might experience some bottlenecks in a foreign country. In my opinion , studying abroad can bring about much more benefits for students compared to any drawbacks it might bring Admittedly, there are a few drawbacks of studying abroad. Firstly, some students may have problems with paperwork such as visa applications . Secondly, living away from home can be challenging because some
srudents have to find accommodation themselves and pay the bills monthly without the financial support
from their family . Thirdly, a number of students may experience culture shock due to the huge differences
between the two countries . These troubles also cause their homesick feeling and thus they miss their
family much more . Another issue is the language barrier Aminority of students, for instance, may find it difficult to express themselves in a foreign language as well as understand the native speaker' slang.
Nevertheless, despite the drawbacks above, I believe that studying abroad can bring about far more benefits for students . The main benefit is that students can choose to study at a pretigious university.
Obviously, the best universities will employ lecturers who are experts in their field. Therefore,
qualification gained in famous university abroad can help students open doors to better job opportunities . Another benefit is that living in another country can broaden
students' horizons. For example, oversea students are exposed to different cultures and customs so they might easily have a better understanding of the new area, the cultures as well as the people where they are living in . In addition , students abroad can immerse themselves in a foreign language. As the result, they can speak a new language naturally without much effort.
In conclusion, the better job opportunities and broadening horizons far outweights any minor disadvantages that could result from studying abroad.
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- More and more students are choosing to study at college and university in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 73
- More and more students are choosing to study at college and university in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48717948718 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8809850273 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3003863118 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1875 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370922169747 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124409994261 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133508109201 0.0667982634062 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124252505923 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148502151975 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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