More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
There are more and more people pursuing higher education in developed countries. Whether this trend brings in benefits more than drawbacks is highly controversial. In this essay, this issue is going to be discussed.
There are some pros that students can gain from studying abroad in developed countries. Firstly, they have access to available educational facilities which are absent from their own countries such as fully-equiped laboratory, modern library, and excellent books. Thanks to this, students can easily broaden their knowledge. Secondly, they get a chance to master language skills as being exposed to multicultural environment in which various languages are used. By talking to native speakers and blending in with the locals in everyday activities, they are taking five-star language courses totally free of charge. Thirdly, it cannot be denied that qualifications one gets from a pretigious university in a developed country will open door to better job opportunities. It is because they are globally recognized and backed up by lecturers who are experts in their fields. As it can be seen, there are several benefits of taking higher courses in developed countries.
On the other hand, there are some cons that students should take into consideration. Because of exchange rate discrepancy (word accuracy), overseas courses often cost an arm and a leg. They are so expensive that students’ families have no choice but to take out all savings to afford it. Besides, hardly can anyone avoid cultural shock when studying in a totally different country. They do not only lose the connections with family and friends but also struggle with a new world independently.
Although there are many drawbacks of studying overseas, the benefits it brings to students are worthy enough for them to trade off.
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- More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...igher education in developed countries. Whether this trend brings in benefits more than...
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Line 3, column 839, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...y recognized and backed up by lecturers who are experts in their fields. As it can be s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33680555556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89220687864 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6696794976 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4117647059 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192724362079 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587186650513 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675510463247 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127968956948 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496815031452 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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