Violent behaviour has been emerging as a worrysome situation not only for society but also governments are influenced by it largely. It is stated that as compared to the past times, communities have been experiencing more violence on the behalf of the people in current time.This problem can be solved with superior efforts of authorities. There are several factors those are highly responsible for these none appreciateble circumstances. Both the solutions and factors will be discussed and forthcoming paragraphs with suitable examples before reaching to conclusion.
It cannot be denied that how this modern world suffering from some unhealthy habits of people which includes numerous unexpected aggressive behaviours and crimes. The root cause behind this phenomenon is that social media has influenced the people by delivering some violated content which pressurize them to do same as it done on social media. For example , in India, 50% youth crime caused by social media and societies directly becoming victims of it. The another reason behind this is that unemployment paving the ways for unhealthy behaviour patterns which disturbs the peace of living area. Hence, it has proved that which factors are compelling the individuals to indulge in violent practices.
To curb the problem, distressing situation like violence calls for an urgent and deep approaches by authorities and governments. Firstly, employment opportunities ought to be launched by governments in order to make it tougher for people to get into crimes and some other bad practices. For instance, in Australia, to control the violence and aggression government has been introducing the large number of work opportunities for people since last few years and it seemed fruitful as the reduction in crimes can be seen. Secondly, prohibitation on violent content on social media is desperately required. Therefore, it can be said that governments can make the situation under control before getting it out of hands with appropriate measures.
In conclusion, after the analyzation of both causes and preventive methods about behaving violently I personally consider that there are numerous worthmentioning reasons which making the situation worst. However, a return of normalcy is going to take very less time if suitable approaches will adopt by governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50833333333 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01395734697 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586111111111 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4140676582 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.9375 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289059959438 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808190227173 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411754063076 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152138964095 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043388250109 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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