More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In modern society, there has been a growing concern associated with delayed parenthood. This social trend could be ascribed to a number of reasons, and this essay will state that it is a negative rather than a positive phenomenon when it comes to parents’ health and generation gap.
There are a few reasons that could be given to explain the trend of giving birth at later stages of life. First of all, labour market is becoming more and more competitive, which demands dedication from workers, so parents prefer devoting to lay a sound foundation for their future career. In other words, children are born in great preparation with the stable income from their parents. Moreover, it is believed that children are raised better by older parents. Due to wealthy life experience and the willingness to have the parenthood undertaking, parents could offer their children with all-rounded development.
On the one hand, it is inevitable that children born to more prosperous and experienced parents can receive more comprehensive education, contributing to the society when reaching adolescence. In addition, parents also reap the benefits of this proclivity as not being interrupted by pregnancy and childcare in their first working years.
On the other hand, it is undoubted that health risks and the difference by age gag outstrip the aforementioned advantages. A significant point is women giving birth late are vulnerable to some serious health problems, becoming irreparably damage for the whole family. For example, female over 35 have a tendency to suffer from some health issues in the prenatal and postnatal period, such as excessive bleeding after childbirth. Another point is the jeopardy to the relationship between parents and children. Because life is constantly updated, older parents often find it difficult to follow the flow of youngsters’ life, leading to misunderstanding and conflicts. To specify, does the matter not only affect children mentally, but it also distort the validity of families, a vital part of society.
In short, the tendency to have children at a later age is caused by several reasons, such as competitiveness of job market. Moreover, I strongly fopine that the drawbacks of this trend outshine the benefits for reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'distorts'?
Suggestion: distorts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in short, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31955922865 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98951512913 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573002754821 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3481701446 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.588235294 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187458153426 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551253841666 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397028008261 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104840767242 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378223679717 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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