Many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
These days, in the class, students are learning and practicing by the instructions of teachers. Some people assert this sort of teaching method will be eliminated in 2050. According to the statement, I personally disagree due to the fact that traditional arrangement still has certain benefits.
Despite the digitization development, manual method is crucial in some aspects such as communication. It means classrooms are able to make a great environment with friends, teachers and teams. Correspondingly, besides listening to teachers in the lessons, children are tend to acquire and improve life skills through friends. For instance, students know how make a humorous story that was experienced from the personal experiences.
Aside from that, people may study at learning online program by 2050; however, it can not replace the teacher’s lectures from school. Take mathematics as an example which subject is prepared carefully at class rather than on learning website. What is more, it is more assurance to believe the teacher about information accuracy. Besides, children in elementary and high school may not have ability of self-control in order to utilize the Internet. Therefore, studying at class can be the best environment for adolescents that provide sufficiently mental and physical.
In conclusions, traditional teaching method can be developed after thirty years; yet, it is unlikely to be taken place of other learning system. There are explanations in terms of communication skills and preparing lessons scrupulously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...o teachers in the lessons, children are tend to acquire and improve life skills thro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62820512821 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16187625713 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675213675214 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0683780092 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128649734879 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402041271229 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479863650519 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069365268187 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309930018923 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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