More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
With the advancement of technology nowadays, one of the most common occurrences in the digital world is the availability of personal information online provided in detail for their daily activities, such as social networking or banking. Despite some advantages associated with it, I suppose that this development is largely detrimental.
On the one hand, the increased presence of personal data online has enhanced users’ experience of goods and services. First and foremost, it makes signing up accounts much more convenient for users and expedites the linking process among different online applications. To illustrate, to open up a stock account or conduct any transaction, investors nowadays do not have to go to stock companies and complete lots of paperwork like in the past but can save time by providing information online and linking online banking accounts with stock exchange apps. Another benefit is that by providing online contact, such as email, and Facebook, people can get notified of any news or information they want to update daily. For instance, job seekers can leave their email addresses on the LinkedIn app and filter out all kinds of jobs they want to apply for so that any new hiring information will be sent directly to their email.
However, I suppose that this is a negative tendency because of the potential severe risks associated with it. Firstly, the private information shared online including one’s name, address, phone number, or social security number can be exploited for illicit purposes such as financial fraud. A hacker known as “Hieu PC” is a prime example who stole thousands of social security numbers of American workers through a sophisticated coded program and resold them on an anonymous broker’s online platform and earned millions of dollars. On a less serious note, when users give out their information to social media companies, online shops, or banks, there is still a slight chance that these companies will sell it to telesales people or even malicious parties. Consequently, people would be bothered by anonymous calls to sell products and services or even worse deceptive calls.
n conclusion, despite certain benefits, I believe that many people putting up their private details online is detrimental. It is therefore necessary to be cognizant of the risks associated with this decision, and even more so to take steps to protect oneself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, i suppose, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39313984169 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95144415819 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609498680739 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.067852561 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313980116684 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939109320449 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623759126737 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173479125769 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461467386615 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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