Most high-level position in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent women. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?
Many high-level and prominent positions in companies are led by men despite more than half of the workforce in many developed countries are women. Companies therefore should allocate a certain position to women. I agree that women have the same ability to hold high-level positions in companies as their counterparts.
To begin with, it is difficult to accept this point of view that men should be the ones who control major positions in companies as this is discriminatory towards women. The idea that women is the weaker sex is no longer relevant in this modern era. In the past, women were thought to be homemakers while men were given the breadwinner title of the family. However, as society moved towards modernism, women have proven to have the ability to both work and take care of their families, therefore indicating the fact that they are capable of controlling chief positions in businesses.
Secondly, we should also bear in mind that having a male-oriented administration may hinder the businesses owing to the fact that there are certain aspects men are not as efficient as women. For instance, women are better at feeling emotions, which makes it easier for them to comprehend the client's needs. Moreover, according to a report on businesses, those that have women in their administrative positions show a higher income number than those that are male-oriented.
In conclusion, the idea of male-oriented in high-level positions in companies is old-fashioned as it underestimates women’s ability in leadership. This way of organizing could also hinder the company's full potential. Both men and women contribute greatly to the development of one business, therefore both should hold high-level positions equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27075812274 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04756011787 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530685920578 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5822425978 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398684963455 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166347253681 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123916262758 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277241466585 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15023424639 0.056905535591 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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