There are a wealth of people who are of opinion the that enhancement the lives of people should be the most crucial purpose of science. I totally concur with that viewpoint, which is clearly explained in my essay.
First of all, numerous scientists who work in laboratories will manufactor a variety of medicines. They can prevent and cure ailments for a large number of patients. What is more, they also can protect health’s residents from global pandemic. Take Covid-19 epidemic for example, there were a great number of researchers who devoted their time and effort so as to study variations of this virus and invent new vaccines and medicines to ward off it. Eventually, we are succesful at treating for Covid-19 patients. The more remedies are generated, the better health’s citizens are.
Secondly, scientists can produce some advantageous diverse chemicals for livestocks to augment their productive which satisfy consumers’ deamnd. Not only do researchers study that, but they also create numerous better species to supply food for inhabitants. If citizens are provided by a load of food, fruits, beverages, etc, they will fell more contented and happy. By doing so, we have more produce to export for foreign countries. For instance, when Vietnam export rice for other nations, Vietnam will have more profit which is utilized for improving lives of people such as helping for impoverished people, upgrading facilities, etc. Therefore, the more produces which are made from researching and transported for foreign nations, the more benefit citizens possess.
In conclusion, science is the most essential in inhabitats’ lives. Cos it makes our fight off the diseases and have more advantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'There is a wealth'?
Suggestion: There is a wealth
There are a wealth of people who are of opinion the that e...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...be the most crucial purpose of science. I totally concur with that viewpoint, whi...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... They can prevent and cure ailments for a large number of patients. What is more, they also can p...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...chers who devoted their time and effort so as to study variations of this virus and inve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32472324723 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81767603038 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7957421602 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090116460423 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319465824376 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558162371342 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723145766717 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519869106153 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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