The most important aim of science should to be improve people’s lives.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Without previous inventions people couldn’t discovery new sciences and help societies to improve their lives. According to some the main aim of every science is extremely extent the quality of people lives. In my opinion this is true and Scientifics should have this purpose in job.
Improving the quality of people’s lives get easy by invention new things and new facilities. Although there are many tasks and aims in a new facility for a government and nation the most important task of is service to different person. For instance, by growing the technology and present the smartphones to market people have more tendency to use them because by their applications the life gets easier than before. With them you can have an online shopping that both save your money and specially your time that is so important. In addition, you can speak with your friend who live in another oversea country that is far from your location. But sometimes the mankind creates things that use for trouble purpose such as dynamite which firstly used in underground mines for blasting rocks and then unfortunately used for killing people in wars.
On the other hand, it depends on that society and nation that how use these creates. Some creates just use for military services and ordinary people don’t be allowed for using them. Not only these people cannot use and know about them but also, even gain any information about them will be punish. But they don’t think these services all are for their security to live better and in safe. As a matter of fact, the main task of military services, security services, NASA services, and so on is giving a better option and service to people which in their lives don’t feel any empty atmosphere and sense. It is your right to have a great life and all duties of science aspects and fields is getting a new landscape and eyesight of new better life. Hence, I strongly agree with this issue that the first and main purpose of science is discovery new knowledge that get the human lives better than before.
In conclusion, people would like to use tools and facilities that are user friend, popular, and experience a good feel by using them. this is the aim of any science.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...and eyesight of new better life. Hence, I strongly agree with this issue that the...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...d experience a good feel by using them. this is the aim of any science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79057591623 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40947505128 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520942408377 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2068650051 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211838385772 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722073642619 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045491138854 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135541761723 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415636145088 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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