The most important aim of science should to be improve people’s lives.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Without previous inventions, people couldn’t discover new sciences and help societies to improve their lives. According to some the main aim of every science is extremely extend the quality of people's lives. In my opinion, this is true and Scientifics should have this purpose in job.
Improving the quality of people’s lives gets easy by inventing new things and new facilities. Although there are many tasks and aims in a new facility for a government and nation the most important task is service to different person. For instance, by growing the technology and presenting the smartphones to market people have more tendency to use them because by their applications life gets easier than before. With them, you can have online shopping that both saves your money and especially your time which is so important. In addition, you can speak with your friend who lives in another overseas country that is far from your location. But sometimes mankind creates things that are used for trouble purposes such as dynamite which was firstly used in underground mines for blasting rocks and then unfortunately used for killing people in wars.
On the other hand, it depends on that society and nation how use these creates. Some are just used for military service and ordinary people aren’t allowed to use them. Not only these people cannot use and know about them but also, even gaining any information about them will be punished. But they don’t think these services all are for their security to live better and in safe. As a matter of fact, the main task of military services, security services, NASA services, and so on is to give a better option and service to people who in their lives don’t feel an empty atmosphere and sense. It is your right to have a great life and all duties of science aspects and fields are getting a new landscape and eyesight of a new better life. Hence, I strongly agree with this issue that the first and main purpose of science is to discover new knowledge that makes human lives better than before.
In conclusion, people would like to use tools and facilities that are user-friendly, popular, and experience a good feel by using them. this is the aim of any science.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'extended'.
Suggestion: extended
... main aim of every science is extremely extend the quality of peoples lives. In my opi...
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Line 3, column 745, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...d eyesight of a new better life. Hence, I strongly agree with this issue that the...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...d experience a good feel by using them. this is the aim of any science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8364116095 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49527229615 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53562005277 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9459208657 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222031322309 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734341250491 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502468839161 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14094159514 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530246326296 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.