In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss the main traffic problems in your country, their causes, and possible solutions.
The proportion of worldwide transportation is now escalating. As a developing nation, Vietnam is not an exception, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of different vehicles. This essay will indicate the main traffic problems in my nation with their root causes and propose some feasible measures to radically address them.
Initially, there are currently two major issues related to/associated with/correlated with this phenomenon. One of them is traffic congestion, which frequently occurs in urban areas such as Hanoi and Danang. The roads are clogged at peak hours when everyone rushes home to get rid of the hustle and bustle of life. The time between 9 a.m to 10 a.m and between 3 p.m to 4 p.m also witnesses long lines of vehicles, mainly motorbikes. Another notable dilemma is the degradation of the infrastructure network, which can easily be seen from narrow and bumpy streets.
The roots of these problems can be attributed to population explosion and tight governmental budgets. As for being a developing country, the proliferation of the Vietnamese population is at a faster pace than other developed nations, resulting in the escalating demand for vehicles. Besides, the national expenditure is limited, and the priority is given to indispensable sectors such as healthcare, education, and military so the allocation of funds is not sufficient to develop the transportation system.
There are several pragmatic approaches to tackle these problems. To begin, solutions should be prudent for reducing private vehicle ownership. For the world at large, increased taxes on gasoline would act as a deterrent to purchasing personal motor vehicles. Besides, should the authorities decrease the cost of public transport, their citizens will be gravitated towards opting for buses instead of cars or motorbikes. Furthermore, more public purse could be channelled into the maintenance of existing transport systems as well as the construction of new ones.
In conclusion, my verdict is that Vietnam has two main traffic problems, which are caused by the teeming population and the restricted financial ability. Some suggested solutions are raising taxes on fuels, lowering the price of public transportation, and spending more on infrastructure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hasing personal motor vehicles. Besides, should the authorities decrease the cost...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46796657382 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13099604382 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618384401114 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.685067179 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.055555556 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12500731943 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340077456757 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397725492121 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705541556606 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390926790675 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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