Most people accept that we are now living in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation is a positive or negative development?
As the time is passing, our world is becoming more and more globalised. Every country is developing to their full extent. Globalisation is process of integrating countries with each other.
Globalisation is a process of connecting each country with one another. It is the key that has the ability to unlock every mystery in technological development. It is the only method by which countries communicate with each other and traditions and cultures are passed. The developed countries have the technology that can be shared to other countries. Therefore, it can be said that globalisation is advantageous to us in many ways. It is the reason that everything is just a doorstep away from us. We can get anything we want and all the information of the world is available to us in our hands. It also has helped many countries to come out of their shells and race towards a better world. India is one of the countries who has flourished a lot because of globalisation. Many different companies have settled here which has created a lot of job opportunities for youths. Globalisation is one of the main reason in increasing the literacy rate of countries. It has made the countries independent and has achieved the unachievable. It has bonded each country with one another, disintegrating the concept of superpower.
Some may suggest that globalisation is disadvantageous for us. Globalisation has led to erasing the boundary between different countries culture. It also has led to mixing of different cultures between countries. This has created a lot of distress in people. They think that their heritage will get ruined by this and everything will lose its importance. People think that it also has made rich countries richer and poor countries poorer.
I don’t think I will agree with the opinion that globalisation is disadvantageous to us. It has a plethora of advantages. Globalisation is the protagonist in today’s world. It has led us to where we are now. It has made many things available to us like: travelling in mid-air, exploring the deep sea waters, cooking in space and many other things. It has also made us capable of exploring the deep secrets of space. Many countries are even trying to conquer the universe. India has also taken a step into that race by sending it’s spaceship to the moon, “CHANDRAYAN-II”. This shows the competition between countries. This feeling of competition is advantageous to citizens of different countries.
In the broader aspect, it can be said that globalisation has made the world better place for us to live. It is the sole reason which has made our future shine brighter than ever before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 775, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
...urished a lot because of globalisation. Many different companies have settled here which has c...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...g the concept of superpower. Some may suggest that globalisation is disadvantageous f...
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Line 6, column 359, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cooking in space and many other things. It has also made us capable of exploring t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0407239819 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24628705448 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434389140271 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 16.0721442886 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6530931609 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5294117647 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 3.4128256513 498% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172035134522 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047689964427 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502044342281 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107525544161 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129815613174 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.06 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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