Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people talk about challenging conditions in metro cities for living, there are people who think that life is getting better day by day in big cities. In my view, life is hard in big cities in few scenarios but overall easier in living quality life.
People who believe that life is getting cumbersome in big cities have some valid points. Firstly, every big city has dearth of living space and people live in very small houses or flats. Particularly, poor people live in temporary house which are not only unhygienic but also vulnerable to collapse in event of fire, cyclone, rain etc. and in happening of such instances, poor people die or injured badly. Secondly, people in big city have to commute long distance for work daily. In most of the big cities, people travel a lot daily for various reasons such as office work, market etc. as places are located in different parts, consequently, people rarely get quality time for rest, or enjoy with family. For instance, my father has to commute 80 km daily for work place and hardly anytime is left for spending with family. Finally, it is also seen that growing population results in surge in demand of eatable items and lots of alteration is done to meet the demand which affect the health of citizens.
Nevertheless, people still want to live in big cities and believe that basic conditions and infrastructure are getting improved day by day. As thousands of people commute daily so authority is emphasizing on improving the daily transportation in order to reduce commuting time. As result, long distances are covered comparatively less time in contrast to small town where even small distance coverage takes time owing to poor infrastructure. Furthermore, medical facilities are quite advanced in metro and inhabitants get advantage of this. Also, most of the big cities are having good education institute or university and local students need not to go out of the city for higher education.
To conclude, housing, commuting time and altercation made the life bit difficult in metro but in spite of that people including me want to live in big town as there are lots of other facilities such as education, medical hospitals and various opportunities presents in big town and getting better day by day which makes the life more easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'go'?
Suggestion: go
... university and local students need not to go out of the city for higher education. ...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... better day by day which makes the life more easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92051282051 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65575801318 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4546786121 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.882352941 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7058823529 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269612150842 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949314196875 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813511272199 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176572994749 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221299150227 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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