In this contemporay epoch, world has turned into a small village. The globalization has affected almost every sector of life. Where, now some sections of population are in favour, while, rest believe it is not advantageous for all. Withstanding, I agree with former view and shall scrutinise it in forthcoming paragraphs.
Admittedly, globalization has numerous benefits. First of all, it has made whole world accessible, providing numerous opportunities for students and workers in form of international education and multinational companies. They are now expecting better career, with multifarious facilities and quality of life. Therefore, issues like unemployment are least affecting people due to huge global market. To illustrate, recent research has shown that in India 30% of employees were working internationally. Hence, it is undeniable truth that globalization has been like a boon for the mankind.
Moving further, it has assisted individuals to broaden their horizons, reducing the discrimination and promoting harmony among inhabitants of earth. Consequently this has resulted in significant increase in tourism, which is beneficial for nations economic growth. For instance, Maldives gets its 40% of revenue from tourists. Thus, it is beneficial for both government and citizens. Nevertheless, despite of its merits it has few drawbacks as well. As, with development in international market, the local companies are facing tough competition and some are at verge of extinction. Therefore, locals are most affected, when they become forced to close their small scale industries because of these big cheese. Deducing, some negative impacts are also there.
In conclusion, as I aforementioned it is beneficial for all. And, some of the drawbacks can be overcome by some simple implications by authorities.
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i think it deserves 7 :) all
i think it deserves 7 :) all the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69597069597 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31272460262 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663003663004 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8175620056 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.65 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14711726972 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396800018512 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404572483512 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794088370024 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579915003425 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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