Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. Is globalization positive or negative?
The past 50 years ago have seen the remarkable speed of globalization, which has raised certain questions about whether its impacts are advantageous to the majority. In my view, there are more drawbacks worth considering.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that globalization has boosted the population’s living standards to some perspectives. The international commerce has witnessed the most outstanding development as more and more countries find import and export crucial to increase the amount of foreign currency and meet the domestic demand. Of course, the citizens are beneficial as it is far easier for them to purchase high-quality products originated from oversea countries with reasonable prices. It is undeniable that the globalization has facilitated a smooth flow of transportation among countries. In fact, there are a number of policies put forward, such as loosening visa procedures to fulfil the need for international tourism and abroad education, which is particularly beneficial to people from all walks of life.
Nevertheless, I would argue that the enormous aftermaths resulted from globalization could not be underestimated. Firstly, the more dependence on other nation’s economy, the more severity a country would suffer. Take the trade war between China and America recently, which adversely affected Korea as this country import a large amount of technological equipment from them, as a telling example. In terms of finance, the consequences are expected on the global scale in regard to how influential the Wall stock market has been. Even more disturbing, though, is the accelerating rate of international crimes. It is tougher and more arduous for policies to prevent evil delinquencies which involve the partnership of multi-nationalities offenders.
By way of conclusion, though globalization plays a critical role in bringing about the prosperity to people in numerous countries, there should be more international collaboration among national leaders to tackle its alarming unwelcoming outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, in fact, of course, such as, in my view, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70261437908 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45859262688 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9009953226 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110757955724 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381998238298 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421847629875 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615505229964 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376280110229 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.