Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, people have consumed their time on their enjoyable activities. Moreover, they have ignored the meaningful things being behind national events. From the standpoint of mine, I completely agree with this argument that people forget the meaning of traditional activities.
Firstly, the first meaning of traditional events is to help people make friends and delete the distance between people. However, due to the technology development, the time people spend on their technology productions is increasing. For example, in some decades before, people usually went out and met their friends. However, scientists developed the technology and invented some useful applications such as the Internet and some texting apps, which have helped people contact and connect with their mates easier. Hence, instead of going out to meet others, they use these applications to save the time they go to the meeting destination. Thus, people do not want to go out and have some memorable activities with their friends when they have free time, or especially the traditional events are taking place.
Moreover, people have invented only some exciting applications, but they have developed some exciting games and relaxing activities. Therefore, people do not love social events, they consume their time on their enjoyable activities instead. Hence, some people forget the meaning which is behind the religious festivals in their nation, especially the youth generation. Moreover, some have entirely wrong thoughts about festivals. For example, taking Chinese is an example; people have the chance to meet their relatives and their family on Tet holidays. However, instead of going home, they visit other nations as their reward after having a hard time working.
To sum up, people have missed the meaning which buries into festivals in their nations. Thus, the older generation has the responsibility that is helping the younger generation clarify the meaning of hiding into activities that take place in their countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4935483871 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65627288507 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3444738808 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.176470588 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215516137456 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881204757419 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567551858299 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15459866228 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348198681609 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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