Most people think that the Internet is good, others think that its disadvantages are more important. What is your opinion? talking about the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?
In the day and age, The presence of the Internet has brought a huge transformation into human lives. It remains a controversy that whether the drawbacks of the Internet outweigh its benefits. In my opinion, the Internet plays an integral role in the human revolution, therefore we should find a way to tackle these setbacks.
As I see, it is the Internet that provides a source of information, which helps residents to broaden their knowledge. In the information age, people could be exposed to News and erudition by just one simple click, The internet facilitates the way citizens access to knowledge with up-to-minute news. Also, the internet provides a major opportunity to buy and sell commodities, even stocks online, and this type of trading is expected to be the leader in the future. For example, in the crisis of coronavirus, e-commerce plays an irrefutable role that helps the world maintain global supply chains when flights and ocean shippings are infeasible. What is more, people can get medical help, hunt for a job, or even vote for an election on the Internet. I have to say, The Internet is vital for the well-being of human beings.
Nevertheless, every rose is accompanied by thorns, the net has its drawbacks. The internet makes residents, especially teenagers and adolescents passive by stopping them make their own entertainment. For example, instead of going outside and communicating with friends, children are more likely to glue their eyes on the screens, which might lead to some serious diseases namely myopic and autism. Besides, some websites and media are giving too many details about violence, sex, and crime. As a result, it might arouse some bad behavior potential among citizens.
To sum up, I would argue we could handle these problems by exploiting its potential as well. With the proper management of the Internet, people ought to experience more fruits of the information revolution, and it helps create a safer, more reliable, and enjoyable world.
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- Health services are basic necessity for a person Private companies have made the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals Do the advantage of private healthcare outweight its disadvantage 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09480122324 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86782331921 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60244648318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9113182058 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190742865793 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602209158539 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040611825849 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113816070576 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304663808108 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.