For most people, when they get their first job they have little Idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation through out their working life If they decided to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.
Hardworking is more necessary for everyone. People who stay with same organisation have the advantages of thought-out understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and employs. if they work hard ,their promotion prospects are good ,and there are likely to be grater job security, with the promise of a good pension.subsequently, then they got additive incentive to long term employs including bonuses,and record scheme.
Firstly, one of the drawbacks of staying with same organisation, is that the person may get stuck doing the same job. However, year after year in case of of moving away from gain more skills and more organised projects. Because these type of person doing only one job as professional . As well as person are lack from additional knowledge .
Basically, That everyone achieves plenty of knowledge related to any field,and site After that , they have lot of imposition ,and achieve success easily in his life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26797385621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01358419127 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712418300654 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9889623267 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202578305375 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649985476866 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588532551401 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122010863387 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684628290974 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.