In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor, other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The belief which the indispensable element devoting to the success of firms is the efficient cooperation among individuals in a department is adhered to, while others have opposing perspectives to the welfare state. This essay argues that teamwork is key to success.
The opinion about the company’s achievements mainly derived from differing factors such as business ideas still has the ring of truth. Every corporate has the business life cycle which includes 5 phases including seed and development, startup, growth and establishment, expansion, maturity, and possible exit. According to firms stages in the business life cycle, the initial step is a business idea that identifies benefits brought to the target segment customer. In the event that benefits, whose the enterprises commit to consumers, satisfy their demands, the startup company will have the potential to compete with business rivals both in the domestic and international markets to become the corporation.
Regardless of how unique the core values of the firms is, there are numerous cases about the failure of corporate because of poor management, lack of trust between team members. All-out problems are about communication skills in the departments. It can not be denied that the revenue of the company, which is significantly affected by the productive of the employee, occupies a decisive role in company’s future prosperity. Provided work environment facilitates the communication between the coworkers and the managers, it will prevent the conflict and misunderstanding. Furthermore, keeping people informed will ensure the smooth daily operation in the company owing to the reason that individuals perform the right task.
In conclusion, effective communication between the managers and staffs mainly devote to the welfare of the business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'firm'.
Suggestion: firm
...turity, and possible exit. According to firms stages in the business life cycle, the ...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: WHOSE_DT[5]
Message: Did you mean 'who's'?
Suggestion: who's
...t customer. In the event that benefits, whose the enterprises commit to consumers, sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68115942029 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13193569762 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.745984576 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989536754386 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330748201176 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241739559712 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566296693678 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126592486552 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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