There is a proposal suggested that university tuition fees should be refunded by the beneficiaries graduated from the institutions . nevertheless, the salaries of these graduates is higher than their peers who do not have a university degree. Although some people might disagree about the proposal for their specific reasons , I do agree with the proposal in terms of finance and investments in other sectors , and, independency
The fact that the wages of the new graduates from university is not as high as other graduates who are studying the same degree because these new employees are still in the primary stage of the career ladder. Paying these fees may not be a problem because these fees are taken from individual’s salaries by instalments and therefore the proportions taken from salaries are unnoticeable and minor. This will boost the governments budgets and help to improve other sectors in the country. For example, if the government invests the money that was allocated to refund the educational bodies of their students into cancer research in the health sector , more people may obtain the chance to recover from this disease in long term.
It is crucial to be acknowledged by the admission department of the university during the study in the university that the government is not responsible for their study. This may motivate the students to work harder and encourage them that the life is not easy and they should depend on themselves when they graduate. For example, if a student is studying science in one of the universities that has very good reputation in the country and he knows that he does not have to worry about tuition fees in the university because it would be paid for by the government , he would not be enthusiastic about passing and might take a longer time to finish his study.
To conclude, it is important to bring up our generations with the fact that it is our responsibility to help the government in all sectors and contribute to mitigate the financial issues that may they may encounter , such as the education sector.
- The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The pie chart give information about visitors to the US from different countries from 1988 to 1992 78
- The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed employed or further education in 1980 1990 and 2000 78
- The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The table below shows information about age average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95389048991 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84128775056 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49855907781 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9086402811 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.9 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197315908194 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803655781082 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490729220223 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115308140369 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592858311524 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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