Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problemsWhat are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?
Motorways are becoming the popular ways to travel a great distance in a speedy manner. However, this has been insufficient attention paid to result multifarious problems such as traffic congestions and environmental issues. Therefore, the local authorities can initiate congestion charge policies or other alternative methods of public transportation to reduce the use of motorways are needed.
Motorways are the easiest ways to travel especially to metropolitan areas from rural areas in a short time. However, the increase use of motorways has created several issues and how to reduce such usage has becoming a major concern for the government. Since problems have arisen, alternative solutions have had to be researched.
The environment will be the primarily affected by this, because it results in global warming. All vehicles are dependent on fossil fuels which substances being released as a toxic chemical that are releasing at atmosphere and this causes various environmental and health hazard. Due to this, the world is suffering from the numerous newly created viruses such as ZIKA, Yellow dust and bird flu.
Perhaps the most apparent annoyance for public is the nuisance that results from the traffic, noise, the dust and the unpleasant odours emanating from the motorways. From this, people can suffer with respiratory issues involving inhale of toxic airs. Thus, the immediate solutions should be sought.
To solve this issue, the local authorities can impose congestion fees. In the UK, for example, after charging of congestion fees, the number of vehicles using of motorways have reduced by half from 2014 to 2015. By forcing the public to disuse of motorways, people will use more of public transportation as an alternative choice and which can result in lesser number of vehicles on motorways.
Alternatively, the government could provide more alternative public transportation to cover long journeys for a shorter time to get rid of personal drivers from the motorways. This will encourage people to use of public transportation instead of their personal vehicles. Thus, this approach can reduce the problems caused by motorway usages.
In conclusion, despite the convenient and faster travelling to the destination by the use of motorways, this creates traffic jams and environmental issues. Therefore, charging of congestion fees and the policies that encouraging public to use of public transportation can be the effective approach to tackle this solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a speedy manner" with adverb for "speedy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...popular ways to travel a great distance in a speedy manner. However, this has been insufficient at...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255868544601 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.154929577465 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110328638498 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0399061032864 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00469483568075 0.0437548338989 11% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.119718309859 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0610328638498 0.0403226058552 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99015080812 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0399061032864 0.0326793684256 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110328638498 0.0861772015684 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0258215962441 0.021408717616 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117370892019 0.011925033212 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2480.0 1933.35771543 128% => OK
No of words: 385.0 316.048096192 122% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44155844156 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.438961038961 0.374742101984 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32987012987 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.249350649351 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166233766234 0.137316102897 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99015080812 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.56093040696 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.0235525595 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.25 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3306921748 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.814263465372 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38877755511 159% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 52.237012987 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.18823529412 1.69124875643 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288112203362 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100792406836 0.102741220458 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0932929514032 0.0668466124924 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575463582959 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154710925443 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114496724216 0.134430193775 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534726138927 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357942813976 0.324371583561 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0911166573574 0.0638462369009 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18604426927 0.228012699653 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254566757169 0.058150111329 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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