The chart below shows the amount of sales for four different kinds of foods in supermarkets in four different cities in America.
The chart represents the four types of foods (bars, crackers, snacks and cookies) sold in supermarkets located in four different cities in the US, namely; New York, Boston, Los Angeles and San Diego. Units are measured in million dollars.
Overall, cookies were the most popular foods among four supermarkets in the US, followed by bars. The least popular food was snacks.
Looking in details of cookies, Boston sold the most of cookies of $3500 million, while New York and Los Angeles had the same sales of cookies of $2500 million. San Diego had the lowest sales of about $1500 million. There was a similar trend for crackers and snacks. Boston sold the highest amounts in crackers and snacks of $1000 million and about $700 million respectively. This figure was followed by Los Angeles of $700 million in crackers sold and about $480 million for snacks sold. New York and San Diego experienced the lowest sales in these two types of food, which recorded at below $500 million sales.
In terms of bars, Boston and Los Angeles sold the highest amount of $3500 million each, followed by $2250 million for New York, and the lowest sales was made by San Diego of $1000 million.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...es and San Diego. Units are measured in million dollars. Overall, cookies were the mos...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cookies') or simply say ''most cookies''.
Suggestion: most of the cookies; most cookies
... in details of cookies, Boston sold the most of cookies of 500 million, while New York and Los ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.311403508772 0.268076937826 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.105263157895 0.116061578633 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0526315789474 0.0759168565197 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0131578947368 0.0366838410393 36% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.162280701754 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0438596491228 0.0379272487307 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.26076711994 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0745614035088 0.0948980150116 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00438596491228 0.00967000014798 45% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1151.0 1161.00487805 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.9 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66995073892 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320197044335 0.337110787985 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251231527094 0.247514529752 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.108374384236 0.171178102325 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0344827586207 0.112407865282 31% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.26076711994 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433497536946 0.546246751206 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.3653518426 49.3433353143 74% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4545454545 23.0094962315 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4064896469 42.9750493124 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.636363636 135.714022679 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 23.0094962315 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.689975730869 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 43.5776981639 47.7609492067 91% => OK
Elegance: 4.37037037037 2.94281807926 149% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410757771303 0.418131533498 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189269459434 0.181151798455 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.159337412672 0.0850326197045 187% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.647467857593 0.706616315825 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.212706245663 0.157042692854 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194921646517 0.228904883108 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121445631899 0.108899403657 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.408067085302 0.367819155151 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.214678121833 0.0812612215331 264% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314691313057 0.316326947829 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103702130751 0.0921553760075 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 0.956097560976 418% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.