The chart below shows the amount of sales for four different kinds of foods in supermarkets in four different cities in America.
The chart represents the four types of foods (bars, crackers, snacks and cookies) sold in supermarkets located in four different cities in the US, namely; New York, Boston, Los Angeles and San Diego. Overall, Boston had the highest sales in all food types and San Diego had the lowest sales in all types of foods. It is interesting to note that, New York and Los Angeles showed the similar sales.
Looking in details for cookies and snacks, Boston recorded the highest sales of $3500 million for cookies and $500 million for snacks, while New York and Los Angeles had the same amount of sales in cookies of $2500 million. The amount of sales for snacks was slightly higher for Los Angeles (about $480 million) than that of New York (of around $300 million). The lowest sales were San Diego of around $1500 million for cookies and $500 million for snacks.
In terms of crackers and bars, Boston sold the most of crackers ($1000 million) and bars (about $2600 million), whereas Los Angeles made a sale of around $600 million and $2500 million for crackers and bars respectively. This is followed by New York of around $2400 million for bar sales and just below $500 million for crackers, whilst San Diego had the lowest sales for both foods; just above $1000 million for bars and $500 million for crackers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the crackers') or simply say ''most crackers''.
Suggestion: most of the crackers; most crackers
...s of crackers and bars, Boston sold the most of crackers 000 million and bars about 600 million,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'so', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.324 0.268076937826 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.076 0.116061578633 65% => OK
Adjectives: 0.044 0.0759168565197 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.02 0.0366838410393 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.004 0.0131127313244 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.184 0.155750635184 118% => OK
Participles: 0.02 0.0379272487307 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.15072890219 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.004 0.0210936926555 19% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.072 0.0948980150116 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1267.0 1161.00487805 109% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.9 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55701754386 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73763899035 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324561403509 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228070175439 0.247514529752 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0789473684211 0.171178102325 46% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0350877192982 0.112407865282 31% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.15072890219 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407894736842 0.546246751206 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 35.5174869038 49.3433353143 72% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 28.5 23.0094962315 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4333778062 42.9750493124 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.375 135.714022679 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 23.0094962315 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 51.3070175439 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 5.28 2.94281807926 179% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368417641673 0.418131533498 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.330642170324 0.181151798455 183% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.140192685783 0.0850326197045 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.773045848827 0.706616315825 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126464493491 0.157042692854 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221509775011 0.228904883108 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123314469336 0.108899403657 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.487298071365 0.367819155151 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113798509942 0.0812612215331 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293650699344 0.316326947829 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112920227394 0.0921553760075 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.