In this contemporary world, people who work the hardest earn the least and the people who work smart earn the most, therefore the greed in the humankind lead to gradual migration of people from the rural region to urban areas. Here I would like to account few difficulties faced by the world if this continues and also list out few measures by which this problem can gradually be solved.
To embark on, In any agricultural land there are very minimum educational facilities so the alternative for learning is just word of mouth and adapting of skilled labor to be able earn a decent wage till they reach their adolescence, Hence this leads to unawareness of education and underestimating Literacy. So even the folks who want their wards to be educated move to urban areas to attain ideal education and exquisite lifestyle. There are myriad problems caused due to this, Firstly, As the rural population starts declining the agricultural lands start lacking human resource for cultivation of crops. Secondly, when people from the agricultural land realize that they can double their pay scale just by migrating to an urban area, masses move to towns and cities seeking for livelihood. This is very precarious for the rural population as the urban area is dependent on them for food and fodder, therefore, Due to the demand the rural multitude will be burdened for extra production with less man-power. Furthermore, the urban population is constantly increasing leading to almost unlimited supply of human resource and hence decrease in demand which can surely lead to the initiation of unemployment in urban areas. Lastly, cultivating of crops requires knowledge and skill, so the villagers maintain a constant knowledge and skill flow from subsequent generation to generation, when the youth starts migrating the senior farmers cannot pass over the skill and knowledge to the preceding generation leading to loss of information.
Mass migration of people from rural to urban areas is a very serious issue and if not solved the losses will be catastrophic. I can list out few measures by which this problem can effectively solved, To begin with, government should show interest in rural educational development and improve educational institutions and facilities in rural areas by diverting government subsidiary to rural areas and introducing new campaigns like "mid-day meals" campaigns to attract young learners. Secondly, government should maintain considerable "minimum support price" at which farmers can sell their crops in order to raise them above poverty line and help them to avoid getting caught in debt. finally, the government should improve all the rudimentary facilities of rural people like hospitals, schools, libraries and markets in order to improve the rural lifestyle.
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- Animals are in danger of extinction Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans Do you agree or disagree 84
- Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect Do you agree or disagree 56
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 61
- A country should spend money on skills training or vocational training for practical work rather than on university education To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...s by which this problem can effectively solved, To begin with, government should show ...
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Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...p them to avoid getting caught in debt. finally, the government should improve all the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30269058296 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90604844025 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517937219731 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1709334992 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.923076923 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3076923077 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227567212252 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843587843033 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603917456265 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164031650788 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300946054171 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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