Museums which people don't visit even in their local areas and the importance of museums
In our society has some type of museums that not much people visit although they are located in cities. And I believe this type of entertainment places have a big importance in our life.
It is understandable that people do not go to some museums which near their home. I think such museums do not have interesting and antique exhibits or staff could not organize exciting tours. What is more, they might be not popular than other archives that around the city. Every pupil wants to choose best thing for buy or best place to visit that enjoyable for free time, and they ask about such places from guide or agency. Finally their entrance fee might be too expensive for inhabitants of city and tourists. People pay for services and goods that worth its cost otherwise they do not try for that type of service.
In my opinion museums have huge role in our life. Firstly, almost all museums have historical exhibits that impress us and give a lot of information about history. We can see some antique things in museums and there are monuments of famous persons and sculptures of people that lived centuries ago. Furthermore, museums are not only historical archives, they also entertainment places. For example, some museums have national titles and achievements like World Cup of “FIFA”, and we can see that there concerts and play organized. In addition to these we can say museums help for local tourism because some museums are very popular so tourists come there around the world.
In conclusion, although some museums do not have visitors, we need these for historical knowledge and entertaining pupose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ciety has some type of museums that not much people visit although they are located ...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the best'.
Suggestion: choose the best
...at around the city Every pupil wants to choose best thing for buy or best place to visit th...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
...nd the city Every pupil wants to choose best thing for buy or best place to visit th...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81751824818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47476474572 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 274.0 20.2975951904 1350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1320.0 106.682146367 1237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 274.0 20.7667163134 1319% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 129.0 7.06120827912 1827% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262094553278 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262094553278 0.084324248473 311% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154294317872 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506869167987 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 138.3 13.0946893788 1056% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -206.63 50.2224549098 -411% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 110.2 11.3001002004 975% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.16 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.22 8.58950901804 235% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 111.6 10.1190380762 1103% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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