The technology undoubtedly has became one of the countries development basis for the time being. It is an obvious truth that it has been gotten more convenient buying and selling goods, in detail, internet which is playing an important role in technology issue and is the most beneficial aspect of technology development.
The first reason is that online shopping is meant to market for individuals from remote distance. I fulfill the dreams of buying any thing with wide range of options without any trouble with just a click on a mouse,in another word, with cities hustle and bustle and lots of busyness which every one is dealing with it, purchasing the necessity virtually is not a big trouble and people could have more leisure time for another activity if they want.
another significant reason is various capability that online marketing provided for people. buying and selling things can be done every where at any time, for instance, if you have desire to watch particular movie during 24 hours a day you can have it for some thing about 6 minutes.
By and large, experience reveals hat online marketing, I mean applying technologies have changed individuals life style completely in favour of consumers. Client not only have more free time but also have wide range of options in their marketing . In short technologies and marketing cause people to focus on the most prominent aspect of life instead of time consuming in traffic jam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
The technology undoubtedly has became one of the countries development basis ...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ology undoubtedly has became one of the countries development basis for the time being. I...
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Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that it has been gotten more convenient buying and selling goods, in detail, int...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...istance. I fulfill the dreams of buying any thing with wide range of options without any ...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...any trouble with just a click on a mouse,in another word, with cities hustle and bu...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...ime for another activity if they want. another significant reason is various capabilit...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Buying
...t online marketing provided for people. buying and selling things can be done every wh...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
.... buying and selling things can be done every where at any time, for instance, if you have ...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou have desire to watch particular movie during 24 hours a day you can have it fo...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...ring 24 hours a day you can have it for some thing about 6 minutes. By and large, experie...
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Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...wide range of options in their marketing . In short technologies and marketing cau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance, i mean, in short, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97520661157 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61981268735 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.505282719 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.777777778 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1109176992 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403015787223 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363805547181 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694143081513 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252038599061 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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