News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
News has been played an indispensable role in every individual’s life. it provides a great number of information of the all societies. Although there are more unpleasant news compared to the engaging ones, I will put forth some reasons to why the concentration ought to be on releasing more amiable news alternatively.
News is one of the pivotal part of every people to keep them informed about the current affairs not only in their cities but also the whole world in different cases. Gaining knowledge scientific fields, give people an opportunity to stay connected to the newest inventions as well as discovery. As a clear example, spreading the information of invention of a vaccine for an acute disease can only be possible by news.The political news keep people abreast with those decisions which government be brought into action.For instance, it is essential to drivers to be aware of the latest laws about driving. Additionally, with listening to the binance world events news people usually are noticed the latest changes as the price of present currencies are not stable. It is defiantly vital to make their proper decision in investment purpose. As, a result, keep following the news update their data and that’s why it is so important.
On one hand, there has been an eye-catching increase in bad news which has been reported more than good ones for two reasons. The majority of news are focusing on unpleasant news because of human’s mind. Our Mind process the negative sentiments more than the positive ones so in my opinion this is the explanation of the predominance of them. Besides, while people pay attention much more to these kind of news, companies are more encouraged to highlight them in order to earn more money. Thus, people go for them and also share them as well as companies that put their concentration on them.
On the opposite side, in my point of view, broadcasters should see the importance of both type of new equally and prioritize good things. Giving proper informations give motivation to people during their life time because hearing postive development give them inspiration to live more efficiently and make the society a better place. Giving destructive information have an unfavorable effect on peoples thoughts. By presenting crime news regularly give them fear because they might believe the rate of crime is increasing and the city is not a safe place while it maybe not true.
To conclude, although following news is crucial and people dedicate a majority of their time on it, they should spend their time on positive ones.otherwise, the negative ones are harmful. lastly,Broadcasters ought to put more concentration on interesting news which give valuable thoughts , however , knowing the bad ones is also important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, lastly, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2326.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10087719298 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92673515792 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530701754386 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4707003675 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402102698531 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124720292499 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902729604912 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227560062351 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058104697435 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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