News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
News has a crucial role on people’s life around the globe. On account of its special place in every country, governments take into account for taking several steps for developing media sector in a user-friendly way.
As for the reason of people’s special attention to news, more importantly, it is related to people’s speedy growing interest and need for learning the changes and challenges happened in the world and impacting to the processes for regulating their life conditions. For example, if someone reads the news about newly accepted compromise of government to pensioners, applyies to the government officials to get it. Morever, people are keen on to follow the processes took place in the world for expanding their otlook.
The kinds of posted news depend on social media strategy of institution. Generally, many news dedicated to bad occasions, as people want to be aware of bad occurs, which affect their life in a bad way. It is not coincidence that, when the bad occasion such as dramatically earthquake happen in one country, not only local, but also foreign media share so many posts, livestreams about it.
With all abovementioned facts, according to some media experts, it is important to sharing good and bad news in balance. They say that considering the important role of news, social media managers should formulate the balanced plan about sharing good and bad views weekly or monthly, as the news affects the people’s mental health as well.
To sum up, regarding the significant role of news in people’s life on account of their high interest and need, it is important to formulate balanced media posts, respectively good and bad news.
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 84
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 67
- Some countries have introduced laws to limit the working hours that an employer can ask from an employee Why are these laws introduced Is this a positive or negative trend 78
- News plays an important part of most people s lives Why is news so important to people Why is so much news dedicated to bad news Should the news focus on good news instead 72
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a user-friendly way" with adverb for "user-friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...veral steps for developing media sector in a user-friendly way. As for the reason of people’s special...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...dia strategy of institution. Generally, many news dedicated to bad occasions, as peo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...dia strategy of institution. Generally, many news dedicated to bad occasions, as people w...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... of bad occurs, which affect their life in a bad way. It is not coincidence that, when the b...
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Message: Did you mean 'share'?
Suggestion: share
... some media experts, it is important to sharing good and bad news in balance. They say ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... posts, respectively good and bad news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, well, as for, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10181818182 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8136479659 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.275675233 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368189333818 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163357746008 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104484549985 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227489599356 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09220603586 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.