In modern life, it is much easier for people to read online newspapers on the internet. As a result, traditional newspapers are becoming less popular and important in comparison to the past. As for myself, I feel that it is primarily determined by the maturity level of the individual. In this essay, I will consider both sides of this topic.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why I would agree that the preference of many people now is to read online news over the traditional press. Internet news producers can provide audiences with real-time updates. Furthermore, by finding information about what is happening in the world online instead of purchasing a newspaper, we can save tons of paper which is the major cause of environmental pollution. For example, people can easily read the news without going out to buy newspapers, which is considered more convenient and reduce the cutting of trees to make paper.
On the other hand, Only a small percentage of the world's population has access to online news. People in various less developed countries do not own any electrical or technological devices, let alone the Internet. Part of the population, particularly the elderly, simply refuses to change and prefers to stick to old favorites. They've been reading traditional newspapers for decades, and there's no reason why they should be forced to switch to Internet news now.
In conclusion, online newspapers are indeed more popular than traditional newspapers. I believe that not only the newspapers online but also the internet will soon be equally important.
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- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 78
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 61
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up to date access to the news on the internet To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, as for, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12355212355 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87899397564 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2838160358 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181798154604 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598906122005 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403241683149 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106262063047 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239012919684 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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