Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access
to the news on the internet.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary life, newspapers are playing a less essential role than ever before because we have approached up-to-date information on the internet. Personally, I both agree and disagree with this statement due to some reasonable facts that I will discuss below.
Firstly, there is no doubt that, when considering teenagers or juveniles, the internet is more important than newspapers. Children can now have access to social media and wireless networks much earlier than their parents and elderly. Moreover, the internet is shown to be very easy, convenient, and efficient when it is served as a means of entertainment or education. Furthermore, with a portable internet-connected device, we can absolutely receive the latest news in all paces of life. Actual videos can be posted on the internet to provide users with the best images of that happening.
However, for the older generation, the opposite may be true. In many countries, the newspaper becomes an indispensable part of people’s lives and it is also one of the national identities. For centuries ever since the paper was invented, people had a habit of reading newspapers in the morning or whenever they had free time. Notwithstanding, older people feel it too difficult to keep pace with our steadily changing world. Many of them are even afraid of the unknown or have no clue what the internet is.
In conclusion, although the internet brings us a myriad of advantages, especially in approaching news, newspapers cannot be therefore neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
... and this is available on your phone where you can follow breaking news stories. Y...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and this is available on your phone where you can follow breaking news stories. Y...
^^^^^
Line 24, column 44, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable using'.
Suggestion: comfortable using
...s important as most people will be very comfortable with using mobile phones. However, in our world t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25095057034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82642784399 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6832014118 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216207157504 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735106347158 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614954872463 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580579388296 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605655197069 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.