Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s ideas and opinions. Why? Is this a positive or negative situation?
The phenomenal influence of newspapers on human perspective is widely awareness. There are raising questions of why such a trend is happened and whether it is a negative or positive one.
For the first question, it is my belief that due to the tremendous demand of getting updated about the world around of people, newspapers can have such an impact. Since it has been the most traditional way of updating news for people for centuries, the majority rather confide in it than some social media. This is how certain opinion and idea is implied and spread among people, and to me, such a trend having both positive and negative aspects.
On the one hand, everyone can read news with newspaper. it is hard for elderly people to check on the news on digital devices because not all of them know how to interact with those devices, so newspaper seems to be a better choice for those aged citizens. On the other hand, it can mislead people with fake news and unqualified information. The president of the United States, whose name Donald Trump has given a warning about such a possibility regarding the fake news related to him during his presidential campaign in 2016. Or in Vietnam, some targets have been charged for spreading the fake news about some diseases that scarring the society. Furthermore, each newspaper has a unique perspective on specific issues, and many relying on such. By virtue of that, certain group of people will be misjudged. For instance, some presidential candidates using newspaper as an effective tool for their campaign, and if the citizens rely on those sources to vote, they may elect the wrong person to work for the country.
In conclusion, I deem that the impact of newspaper on the citizens’ point of view have both advantages and disadvantages. However, for all the reasons mentioned above, the disadvantages have outweighed its advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... everyone can read news with newspaper. it is hard for elderly people to check on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97160883281 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76338173216 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583596214511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6047207909 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209064105997 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692021525646 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542913565524 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144198915704 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465667456262 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.