Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
An increasing number of people are opting to have their own business, instead of working as employees for another business. Although this situation may be the result of an improvement in regard to freedom, it could, nonetheless, prove to be disadvantageous for the individual, as the risk of failure is increased in self-started business.
With regard to the cause, it could be said that the younger generations have been brought up in less strict families, and therefor have not been accustomed to obeying authority figures. To elaborate, one might argue that this generation has had a freer childhood and has been bound by less rules. Consequently, as adults, they tend to prefer environments that are free of the formalities and strict rules that many organizations have in place. This attitude does not bode well with being an employee who works a 9-to-5 job, so more people are deciding to put their time and effort in pursuit of their own dreams, under their own laws, instead of working for another company.
As for the consequences of being self-employed, one might consider that with no authority to strategize and establish order, the self-employed adult might feel lost and lack the external motivation that is necessary to get the job done. It is as if, this pursuit of freedom, could result in too much freedom; meaning there would be no proper structure to provide directions for someone who has started a business. This lack of framework increases the possibility of failure and being defeated by the competition, which could have drastic negative effects on the financial and emotional well-being of the individual.
In conclusion, it could be said that although freedom has always been a cherished value and to opt for freedom and building one’s own career is a brave move, it is not without its dangers, and it could lead to unwanted results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun rules is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...a freer childhood and has been bound by less rules. Consequently, as adults, they te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, as for, in conclusion, in regard to, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00643086817 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88575849162 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2781700168 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.7 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342779776981 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134256021295 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833351182498 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21062520748 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081192435846 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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