Animal exploitation has long been an ethical controversy, and it seems unlikely that both supporters and opponents of this theory will find any common ground. There are diverse viewpoints on this topical debate, and I will discuss them in this essay.
On the one hand, many people are convinced that human beings and other living species on Earth are of equal importance. From an ecological perspective, they believe that each creature plays a certain role in harmonizing the ecosystem, and it will be contradictory to teach children to respect the environment while we consider other creatures as inferior ones. Moreover, it is a proven scientific fact that animals, especially higher mammals can feel physical and emotional pain; hence, it is morally wrong to capture and treat them as mere objects.
On the other hand, other people point out the essence of using animals for medical purposes, and it is ultimately for the sake of humanity. Firstly, while it is fatally perilous to test the efficacy of any medication directly on humans, animals appear to be the most suitable objects because many of them bear genetic similarities to humans. Secondly, animals possess antibodies and medical substances which are essential for medical treatments. For instance, the antidote for life-threatening rabies is extracted from horse serum, and cow tallow derivatives, namely glycerol, are used in vaccine manufacture. Moreover, the media or animal welfare organizations, to some extent, tend to exaggerate and horrify the image of animals being examined in laboratories. It might be fallacious to consider medical experts as slaughters or animal haters while they are devoting their time and effort for the sake of our health.
Overall, despite the moral questions about the ethics of animal testing, I subscribe to the theory that it is the optimum choice for clinical trials and observational studies.
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- Countries（where there is high unemployment）most pupils should be offered only primary education, there is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 84
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 85
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32450331126 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88558633246 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0166631959 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219767267022 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761595943878 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505002838676 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103279831225 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641016392989 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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