Nowadays celebrities are the more famous for the glamorous and the wealth and therefore the achievements, and this set a bed example of two young people
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are the several argument that the celebrities are the well known for the luxurious lifestyle and the physical attraction. while others believe that the celebrities are the famous for their hard work and achievements. It seems to me that the famous people always role model of a man youngsters. Hence, I disagree that they said submit example for juvenile.
to begin with, it is evident that the achievements always bring a popularity among the people.this is due to the fact that the man is sports ellipse have less wealth and glamorous but nowadays, they are famous in the world by their achievements. For example, Mary Kom she is a simple woman from the India and after achieving the boxing championship. See because of Amazon the sets a good example for a many girls in India. Thus, it is indisputable that achievements is always sets inspiration example for young people and hard work give them glamorous and wealthy life.
on the flip side, it should not be forgotten that the glamorous and the wealth is always comes with achievement. Hence, sometimes celebrities are more famous when they are belong from rich families. This is due to the when they achieve something by their wealth and physical attraction. Exception can be seen in the many Bollywood celebrities like Abhishek Bachchan. you always get attention from the public because his father is Amitabh Bachchan the well known by their wealth and also for their hard work. the operators of unsupported that the celebrate the famous because they have a wealth and glamour.
In conclusion, despite the glamour in the wealth, achievement is a greater important in everyone life. Because after achievements one can get all the wealth and glamour in the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several arguments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96896551724 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72899828307 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493103448276 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7038768 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246534333447 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843086852755 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417566907733 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145420123826 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592775662339 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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