Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
In the fast growing world, public figures are earning more money than the government politicians. Moreover
, the people are most interested in encouraging cinema, tv shows and the interest in the common shows which got increased a lot in the last
few years. This
rise, made the actor/actress to earn more money than the government representatives. In my opinion, I believe this
rise is definitely going to create a negative development of the society.
On one hand, since movies are getting released frequently, young kids and students shows interest in watching them rather than focusing on their studies or some extra curricular activities. Additionally
, they are getting addicted to the TV Shows, programs and they are more interested in going out for theatres rather than sitting in the home. For example
, if a movie is getting released around thousands of people are ready to watch it by paying for the tickets. Moreover
, in a year, almost fifty shows are getting released. Hence
, the profit for the movie clubs are getting elevated and we, who is paying for the movie, are spending a lot to watch the shows. As a result
, an Individual economy will be affected and the celebrities, fame and development is getting increased.
On the other hand
, most of the people start opening a fan club for them. This
is one of the common mistake that we are doing. In addition
to this
normal people are keeping banners and promoting them by giving advertisements like posting posters, through newspapers and son on. However
, all the movies are not delivered with a good social message and most of them are not needed for the culture. This
creates a negative impact. To illustrate, the huge funds which are spent in these activities could be donated to a welfare organization or to some children educational funds. Thereby, our community will get improved.
To conclude, we are the reason for the famous man to earn so much cash than compared to the government officials. This
is not going to give any personal improvements to the society as well as for a normal man, and hence
, these can be avoided as much as possible. By the way, it can be contributed to the needed, who is not even having the basic needs like food, shelter and clothes. Finally
, I believe, increased shows are going to give only negatives
To the overall nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93984962406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73276142524 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528822055138 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9019068797 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47619047619 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238699955987 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724923078174 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704277920967 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670822032573 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695969943657 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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