Nowadays food has easier to prepare his change improve the way people live ? Use specific reason and. example to support your answer.
"Good food is good mood" food is defined as that thing which are presence of vitamin, protein, mineral . In this essay that should various changes takes place by people for faster make food ; those are beneficial for our or not? through this essay. I shall explore my point of view same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To conclude, that the availability of food fullfil our needs of eat. Because food is maintenance our body therefore, they are great impact on our life. Food processed into home better rather than restaurant, and any other places .
First of all, food is most proteiness substance. Everyone necessary eat good quality of food like green vegetables. Because they have main for development of our body with out it we are not live . although, people mostly prefer outside food rather than house food that is good beneficial for our . They are preferred fast food like Chinese, Japanese. Therefore, they are save time for do work . Because at present time life of every one is hustle bustle. That is the reason People are preferred outside food rather than make into home, and it is easier to purchase any shops. Regarding, when people are makes food into then they have plenty of time for make meals that is hardly possible.
Second of all, people not make meal into home through it so many dangerous results develop . Because marketing food are not pure form into which mixture of so many chemicals that is why they are more time preserve from normal ones.but people not known this types of negative feedback. Because they are main target for save time , and then they do any at proper timing. Moreover, when people are preferred outside food then many types of disease also developed.this is cancer, eye blindness, asthma, allergies.it is refer epitome that a survey conducted by California university for awar to people upon negative effects of outside food.in which university authority said that people that does do prefer to outside food because house food more better and postic rather than restaurant meals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03197674419 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45320190238 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526162790698 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 81.329745481 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.55 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13831960302 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046789661105 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385034431472 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908822930291 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024007948479 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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