Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you thing this is a positive or a negative development?
These days, there are an increasing number of people who are trying to use alternative medicines and treatments to mend their medical issues rather than visit their doctor. From my viewpoint, this trend is concerning and might be seen as a negative development.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why people tend to find alternative treatments instead of asking the doctor. It might be due to financial problems, unsuccessful earlier treatments or their living place. However, it is important to recognize the potential drawbacks associated with such practices. Relying on medicines from unreliable sources or the internet may adversely affect the patient’s symptoms, leading to a downturn in their health condition.
On the other hand, taking a doctor’s advice can give us several benefits. Firstly, most people lack the knowledge necessary to choose the best course of action without a doctor's supervision. As a result, people can pick an alternative treatment that makes their condition worse. Secondly, in order to receive a diagnosis for severe diseases like cancer, one must see a healthcare provider. The first thing you should do if you're feeling unwell is get your body checked out to make sure there's nothing major going on that could endanger your life.
In conclusion, it is accurate that we should be conscious that most of the time, we need an expert to ensure that we are not in a dangerous scenario and that our health-related issues are not made worse by our ignorance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82172389132 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662601626016 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7103104759 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291550316684 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086729650829 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075948985907 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154636272263 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944882515472 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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