Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is very common to see that there is an increase in the number of people using alternative medicines and treatments in place of listening to a doctor’s suggestions. In my opinion, this issue is a negative development and therefore leaves people with severe consequences.
For some people, going to the hospital or visiting doctors and professionals costs them financially, in some cases, they are also a waste of time if the health problems are not too serious, and as the result, people might try other treatments or medicines that have decent prices and suited for their demand. for example, when people suffer a mental health problem such as anxiety, they might tend to cure it on their own by changing their diet, doing more exercise, and using some therapy such as aromatherapy or meditation. some medicines that are made from natural plant extracts like chamomile capsules are also incredibly helpful to combat anxiety and do not leave any health complications since it is a safe substitute for ordinary medicines
in spite of some benefits, using medicines and treatments that are not be allowed by doctors can lead to negative effects on your health. there are various health problems that have similar symptoms and it is necessary for people to notice them carefully especially if it becomes a daily occurrence. unfortunately, not many people can extrapolate exactly the disease that they are suffering from and this is when people need doctor helps. doctors are who have been trained to understand thoroughly diseases and have many years of treating patients, can give you the most useful advice for your health problems. in contrast, it might be risky for people to use their own medicines since medicine is often made for certain diseases and will not be useful for others, some medicine also does not have a clear original, is company produced, or is out of date. in addition, several serious diseases might need surgery and doctors are the only people who can take this responsibility.
in conclusion, although people can use some alternative medicine or treatments that make the process of treatment a little bit easier, cheaper, safer but also helpful. I am in the opinion that trying to use these things and depending solely on them instead of visiting doctors is a negative trend and will severely damage people’s health in a long term
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00253807107 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72927150175 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515228426396 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9232854139 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.25 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329679870044 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133320615141 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044516640467 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223971309115 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341565101215 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.