The advancement in the field of transportation has led international travel even more flexible. Travelling have significant impact not only to the nation but also, to the travellers itslef. Rise in tourism business boost up economy of host country so as to the travellers itself geeting oppourtunity to learn such as; language and culture as well as participate in volunteer activitie abroad. While, risk of entry to the crime, and influence of foreign culture can be seen as being key disadvantages to this.
There is no dought that travel is one of the great source of remittence for so many countries. It direclty boost up the economy of a nation since it mobilize foreign money to the international market. In addition to this, tourisms industry rise up and helps to create employment oppourtunity to locals. The consequence of increased tourism business will obviously grow economy of a nation. For instance; tourism business here in Nepal make up most of the economy that is windfall to the infrastructure development. Besides, oppourtunity to expose into the global market is another merits of overseas travel. Since, global exposure is path to learn and grow that provide oppoutinity to add assets to personal and carrer growth for travellers. In a growing technological corporate world, academic excellence is less valued when it comes to proving job opportunity. The demand of soft skills like; communication, ability to speak multiple language can be gained through international orientation.
In contrasts, host country has to bear a risks of international crime when more foreigners visit their nation. Every travellers has its own purpose before landing to abroad. Similarly, some ineternational traveller might have intention to crime in foreign land. As an evidence, the murder of more than 10 muslims in newzealand in 2019 was found to be murded by one australian citizen. In addition to this, loss of culture and influence of foreign culture among youth is the result of this. When people travel abroad, they tend to adopt and adjust in foreign culture. While doing so, they forget their own culture. Neverthless, the superiority of international travel outweighs its downsides as it brings lots of oppourtunity to learn and grow for both travellers and nation.
In conclusion, overseas travellers brings economic growth of a nation and also, it isa source to learn and grow through global exposure. Wheres it might give threat as entry to new crime, and also, loss of culture. Nonethless, I believe the downside of international travelller is less fortune as it brings so many benfits for both traveller and nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, similarly, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20657276995 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02355436863 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511737089202 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.243431717 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4166666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54166666667 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277342803303 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833098500007 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831310334708 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189915799446 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634078744807 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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