Nowadays, it is becoming more popular to see animals to be kept in captivity, for instance, the zoo Do the advantage of keeping animal in the zoo outweigh the disadvantage?
In recent days, in many countries animals are being kept in special closed areas, namely zoos. The dispute over this trend came up with a lot of perspectives considering the benefits and drawbacks of such a trend. Through this essay, I will mention some of the common pros and cons of keeping animals in zoos.
To begin with, the deed of gathering animals and putting them in zoos can be ecommically and environmentally beneficial. Firstly, in many coutries, zoos are considered an attraction site for tourists and foreign visitors. As a result, they have created a critical proportion
of the income of many governments and countries, and therefore viewing it as a positive thing. Another advantage is that these specialized zones can aid in saving many animal species that are at the edge of extinction. Due to the degrading weather conditions and global warming, nature is loosing a lot of its elements including trees and grass, which are considered the primar soures of food wild animals need, as well as the lose of habitat. Thus, zoos can provide a proper environment for those animals providing them with nutrition and habitat needed.
On the other side of the case, zoos brought up some drawbacks that are worth considering. One disadvantage
is that taking animals away and abandoning them from their lands and origins equally means that we are preventing them from living freely and acting way they were naturally meant to be, so it is considered to be an inhumane behaviour. Furthermore, many zoos take advantage of the animals they keep for medical breakthroughs and cosmetic experiments which are all illegal because those innocent spirits have rights as we humans have too. For the
previous reasons, zoos can be disadvantageous and morally unacceptable.
In brief, although it is becoming commonly widespread to keep animals in special zones and zoos, we must always consider and think of the merits and demerits that rise from this behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, so, therefore, thus, well, in brief, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07098765432 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80473035169 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3163929303 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298279648516 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103870842242 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603919407692 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142843383121 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323218446809 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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